This is my first emoji. I chose this emoji because I was away on Monday and Tuesday as I was at Fiji. I will tell you guys what I did in Fiji on another blog post!😀.
This is my second emoji. I chose this emoji because I was REALLY tired because I didn't get enough sleep as I was travelling a lot in the holidays. Also, because in the holidays I get to sleep in but as it was school I didn't get to.
This is my third emoji. I chose this emoji because in the workshop we did today for maths was a little bit complicating. In maths we did problem solving and there were problems based on addition, subtraction, multiplication and division. We did the problems to show the learning coach how we solve problems and how we used our learning from the past few terms.
Hmm... What am I looking forward to this term. I am looking forward to SOOO much things!!. But what I'm super excited about is the Year 6 Kokako Lodge camp. We get to stay their for 4 days'ish. Also I am looking forward to learning new things everyday and share it with my parents.



Hi Shreya,
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful blog post! It is really well written and very clear. I really like the emojis you have chosen to represent your feelings for this week. Hopefully you'll get enough sleep next week to feel fresh and revived for the learning. Also, I'm glad that you're looking forward to camp - I am too!
Next steps - try to include commas to separate items in a list, or try to use commas after subordinate openings to improve your writing.
Lovely work!
-Miss Love
Thank you!!
DeleteHi Shreya!
ReplyDeleteI really like how you put lots of adjectives in your writing.But I really wanted to know what happened at Fiji to make you feel like that.But the important thing is that I enjoyed reading it!
Thank you Norah for the constructive feedback. I hope I can do it for you!
Deleteyou want to learn 5000 more thing good for you and also good luck when you go to camp you will have a good time
ReplyDeleteHi Kim, it actually said so much more things not 5000 things. Sorry I think the font made it look like it was 5000 but it's okay!. Thank you!
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